I find it incredibly intriguing at the presumption of
some authors when it comes to searching for an agent and/or publisher for their
manuscript. In high school, college, and university, creative writing courses
focus on the craft of writing. Once released from those institutions a writer
will hole-up in their privacy, writing what they believe to be the perfect
novel. Others may move their training into individual writing courses. One
thing that is rarely taught is the process of querying agents and/or publishers.
So many writers and would-be published authors have no
clue how to spark the interest of an agent/publisher, let alone how to find
one. It is the business end of the world of the writer that is almost never
taught. So I have deigned to embark, albeit briefly, in offering my meager
knowledge of the process.
The number one most important thing you must have,
before you begin your search, is to finish your manuscript.
Let me say that again, especially
for all you fiction writers out there (this does not necessarily hold true for
non-fiction, but it still helps):
FINISH YOUR MANUSCRIPT.
This means you have completed the
draft, edited it, fixed it/rewrote it, maybe having another edit it for you,
fix it again, and then leave it alone. The more you try to ‘fix’ it, the
greater the chance to F-it up. Do not try and have different versions that can
be sent to different agents/publishers because you’re trying to second guess
what they may want. Have one version. If you are incredibly lucky to be taken
on by a publisher your novel WILL be ripped apart through an intensive editing
process you never expected. This is not necessarily the case with agents, but I
go too far. Let’s say you’ve completed your manuscript, what happen next?
For many of us, finding an agent
is the next stage. It is usually the agent that acts as a gateway into the
publishing world, but how to possibly secure an agent? I will tell you this;
just because you want an agent doesn’t mean you’ll get one.
There are directories on the
internet that lists numerous agents. Find them and then learn which of the
agents are reputable, accepting unsolicited queries, the genres they represent,
and their specifications on how they like their query packages. This process
takes time and research. Any agent that expects money from their clients beyond
some photocopying is someone you do not want to query. Remember, take your time
and research each agent you wish to query. Make a list of agents with their
contact information.
You’ve got your list. Now what?
The hardest part.
Now you must compose a query
letter and different synopses of different lengths to accommodate the desires
of the agent. This query is a ONE page letter of introduction of your book and
yourself. It MUST be punchy enough to catch the agent’s eye so as to continue
reading. It should also be formatted and written as a BUSINESS LETTER. If you
don’t know how to write in ‘business speak’ then it is high time you learn. It
shows your professionalism. There are many examples of finely crafted query letters
out there, find them on the internet and study their structure. If you’ve got a
beta-reader, use him/her. Make sure that query letter is as perfect as you can
make it. As for your synopses, good luck. It MUST be amazing and it is one of
the HARDEST things to write. Again, use your support network to help you edit
it and edit it and edit it, etc., until they are perfect.
Okay. The manuscript is completed.
The query letter is written. Different synopses are finalized. The list of
agents is done. Now you’re ready.
Not so long ago all query
submissions were sent by snail mail. It was costly and time consuming and bad
for the environment. Today, more and more agents recognize the impact of all
these submission packages have on the environment, therefore most now accept
queries via email, though some still expect hard copy submissions. In EVERY
CASE personalize each query letter to the agent you are sending to. Never ever
send it “To Whom It May Concern.” If you don’t know, then don’t send. Whoever
receives it with that will ensure your query hits the recycling bin, virtual or
real.
For the sake of this blog, let’s
assume the queries are sent electronically.
I’ve already stated that EACH
query is to be individually personalized. It also means that for each agent you
send an email DO NOT C.C. other agents of send out a blind c.c. (b.c.c.) so
that you only have to send one query email. If you do so your query will BE
DELETED. If the content of your email isn’t a professionally written, business
style query letter, most likely it will be DELETED. This means no “Hi, I saw
you’re accepting queries, please look at mine.”
Many agents (and publishers) will
inform potential author/clients how they want the email to look and even to
what’s in the subject heading and whether or not they want the submissions as
part of the email or as an attachment. If they want attachments, then they’ll
let you know what document formats they accept. How will you glean this
information? Very simply, through your research in who to query. If you don’t
have this information, then you need to double check your research.
Okay. You have everything picture
perfect. Now it’s time to show your baby and press the SEND button.
Let’s be perfectly clear. Agents
are extremely busy people who receive hundreds of queries a month. DO NOT take
it personally when you receive a form letter rejection. It has nothing to do
with you. It’s just that they are that busy.
Let’s stop here for a moment with
the realization that you WILL receive rejections. This is par for the course.
If you can’t accept it, then you shouldn’t be looking or representation to a
traditional publisher, or even looking for a publisher. One thing you should
NEVER do is email the agent back with an anger filled letter. Doing so burns
bridges fast than a forest fire. Agents talk to each other and if you throw a
Diva-fit at each agent you receive a rejection from, therefore don’t be
surprised if you get black-balled. Do not become one of the “Authors Behaving
Badly” Club.
Now to continue on a positive
note.
After a slew of rejections, you
receive a response requesting part or the whole manuscript. Congrats! Do
something to celebrate. An agent is interested! Send him or her what he or she
wants and the wait.
And wait.
And wait.
Just because you send an agent the
requested manuscript doesn’t guarantee a yes. This is the HARD part. You have
to wait for the agent to read the manuscript and decide if it, and you, are
something he or she can a) work with and b) more importantly, sell to
publishers. Give the agent/publisher time. Generally, it’s three months, and in
most cases the agent/publisher will assume that you have stopped querying until
they make the decision to take you on or not.
If you receive a rejection at this
point, it’s okay to be sad. Do something to pick you up and get back on the
horse. In most cases, if you’re rejected at this point there won’t be a form
letter; you’ll receive a personalized letter explaining why. In rare
occurrences, they’ll ask you to resubmit when you’ve fixed those issues.
I try to be a positive person, so
let’s say after all this time and effort an agent is interested in signing you.
YEAY! Go out! Celebrate, but just because you signed with an agent doesn’t mean
that the agent will be able to find a publisher for your novel.
Did I say I try to be positive?
I was!
I’m also realistic.
So if this is the route you wish
to try, go for it! I tried too. One thing you need to know in this business is
that you must have strong determination. If going this route isn’t your thing,
then look at self-publishing—that’s another blog post! Regardless of the path
you take, to succeed you must work hard and understand this is a business no
different than McDonald’s selling Big Macs. The only difference is that we’re
selling a piece of ourselves called our Novel(s).
One thing I’m asked over and over
in interviews is what advice I give to new and would-be authors. I give the
same answer.
Never give up! Never
surrender!
Cheers!
Karen Dales
Award Winning Author
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Thank you for this detailed and realistic look at the submission process. I'm pinning it on my Pinterest "Writing Resources" board, and I'm now following your blog.
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Good advice. An author is under no obligation, though, to stop querying while an agent is considering a full or a partial. If the agent wants an exclusive, they must ask for it, and the author should grant it only for a limited time (2 weeks, no longer than 4). Agents are so slow and sign so few new authors that it could take years to get an agent if you stopped querying every time someone expressed interest in your work.
ReplyDeleteGood point, Andrea! I remember, after my first novel was published with Dark Dragon Publishing, that I was still receiving responses from agents I had queried 2 years previous!
DeleteThis is great! When I started out I was so focused on the creative process I never considered the business side to writing. The querying is just the beginning.
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